Here is the grand reveal!
Much better, don't ya think? Here are the changes (if you want to see the first go around click here)
1. I took out the red stitching around the neckline
2. Cut strips out of another old white t-shirt, gathered them and sewed them around the neckline.
3. Made a skinny tie that goes right around the waist.
Not bad. I may try to tackle another!